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First EES Meeting

First EES Meeting. 30 th of June (10-12) Location: KOWSAR Presenter: E.Torbati. Meeting agenda. 10- 10:20 EES 10:20- 10:45 Mr. Moradi presentation 10:45- 11:15 Dr. Behshadfar presentation 11:15- 12 Analysis of the manuscript. EES.

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First EES Meeting

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  1. First EES Meeting 30th of June (10-12) Location: KOWSAR Presenter: E.Torbati

  2. Meeting agenda • 10- 10:20 EES • 10:20- 10:45 Mr. Moradi presentation • 10:45- 11:15 Dr. Behshadfar presentation • 11:15- 12 Analysis of the manuscript

  3. EES • The English Editing group is a division of KOWSAR which provides English editing services as well as translating services. • The main concept of the manuscripts are Medical sciences and related sciences such as psychology and microbiology • At present we just PROOFREAD the manuscripts but we should shift to COPY EDITING • The Quality is as important as punctuality

  4. Objectives • To provide fault free editing services • To consider the authors’ satisfactions which is the main goal of this group. • To provide synchronized services • To develop our services • To become Copy editor (who?)

  5. How could we achieve to our goals? • Being knowledgeable about Medical texts and vocabularies (how ?) • To boost the grammatical and structural knowledge ( how?) • To use FORMAL structures • To have more knowledge • To accept our faults and try to cover it

  6. Sample • As was demonstrated in our study cigarette smoking was three times more frequent in Tuberculosis patients comparing to healthy individuals. Similar to other researches, association between Tuberculosis and smoking was shown to be certain in our study. ????Interventions of smoking cessation are recommended to be included in the current Tuberculosis control practice.

  7. The edited one • As demonstrated in our study, cigarette smoking was three times more frequent in tuberculosis patients comparing to healthy individuals, certifying the direct association between smoking and tuberculosis. Similar research reports have shown a definite association between tuberculosis and smoking. These results prompt for including interventions for smoking cessation in the current tuberculosis control practice.

  8. Sample • Among 253 TB patients, 123 (48.6%) were male and the remainders were female. • Among the 253 TB patients, 123 (48.6%) were males, Ninety seven were female (38.3%)

  9. Sample • Similar to other researches, association between TB and smoking was shown to be certain in our study. Interventions of smoking cessation are recommended to be included in the current TB control practice. • Similar to other researches, the association between TB and smoking was demonstrated in our study. It is therefore recommended to include interventions for smoking cessation in the current TB control practice.

  10. HIGH LIGHT • Please consider to the prepositions and use a proper prepossession Sample: It has been reported that HCV prevalence is very high in Asian population It has been reported that HCV prevalence is very high among Asian population

  11. HIGH LIGHT • Smoking could increase the risk for both TB infection and development of active TB disease, among children and adults • Smoking could increase the risk of both TB infection and development of active TB disease, among children and adults

  12. HIGH LIGHT 2. please consider that the name of disease must NOT begin with UPPERCASE. it has been reported that Tuberculosis is a disease…. it has been reported that tuberculosis is a disease which…

  13. High LIGHT 3. Bacteria name should be written in italic Staph. aurous is a strain of bacteria….. Staphylococcus aurous is a strain of bacteria….

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