Getting from Point A to Point B: Creating Good Transitions

1. Getting from Point A to Point B: Creating Good Transitions Al Kammerer and Bobbi Olson 11 October 2006 with additions and changes by Tina Heller (2014) for educational purposes.

2. What is a transition? • Bridges parts of your paper together • Helps you (writer) carry over a thought from one sentence to another, from one idea to another, or from one paragraph to another with words or phrases • Guides the reader to interpret ideas the way you (as a writer) want them to Point B Point A

3. or breaks between ideas What is a transition? • Transitions link sentences and paragraphs together smoothly…. so there are no abrupt jumps

4. Some lead the reader forward to “build” on an idea or thought Others make your reader compare or draw conclusions from preceding thoughts Types of Transitions • There are several types of transitional devices; each leads your reader to make certain connections or assumptions about the areas you’re connecting

5. Types of Transitions • A transition can be • A single word • A phrase • A sentence • An entire paragraph • All function the same way  a transition either directly summarizes the content of a preceding sentence, section, etc., or it helps the reader anticipate or comprehend NEW information that you’re going to present.

6. Transition Placement • Between Sections • Between Paragraphs Think of yourself as the plumber who needs to use piping (transitions) to connect the various tubs, sinks, sewers, etc. within a house.

7. Transition Placement Transitions are like road signs to direct the reader along the best route through the essay.

8. Transition Placement • Between Sections • In longer works, it may be necessary to include transitional paragraphs that summarize for the reader what was just covered and specify how it connects to what is going to be covered next. • BetweenParagraphs • If you have done a good job of arranging paragraphs so that the content of one leads logically to the next, the transition will highlight a relationship that already exists by summarizing the previous paragraph and suggesting something of the content of the paragraph that follows. • A transition between paragraphs can be a word or two (however, for example, similarly), a phrase, or a sentence.

9. Example of Paragraph Transitions However... Now…

10. Transition Placement • Within Paragraphs: • As with transitions between sections and paragraphs, transitions within paragraphs act as cues by helping readers to anticipate what is coming before they read it. • Within paragraphs, transitions tend to be single words or short phrases.

11. Transitions – To Add • These words signify that you’re elaborating on an idea in your writing: • And, again, and then, besides, equally important, finally, further, furthermore, nor, too, next, lastly, what’s more, moreover, in addition, first (second, etc.) • Example: Friends is a television show about six friends. It shows how relationships are often complicated. • Friends is a television show about six friends. Furthermore,it shows how relationships are often complicated.

12. Transitions – To Add • Example: Coal production is a major industry in western North Dakota. It provides the entire country with electricity. • Coal production is a major industry in western North Dakota. Furthermore,it provides the entire country with electricity.

13. Transitions – To Compare • These words signify you’re comparing a previous idea to a new one in your paper, or describing two different things: • Whereas, but, yet, on the other hand, however, nevertheless, on the other hand, on the contrary, by comparison, where, compared to, up against, balanced against, although, conversely, meanwhile, after all, in contrast, although this may be true… • Example: Ross and Rachel are dating. Ross and Monica are siblings. • Ross and Rachel are dating. However, Ross and Monica are siblings.

14. Transitions – To Compare • Example: North Dakota produces both coal and oil. Coal and oil impact North Dakota communities differently. • North Dakota produces both coal and oil. However, coal and oil impact North Dakota communities differently. Alternative (however as a conjunctive adverb) North Dakota produces both coal and oil;however, coal and oil impact North Dakota communities differently.

15. Transitions – To Prove • Use these words to indicate support for your argument: • Because, for, since, for the same reason, obviously, evidently, furthermore, moreover, besides, indeed, in fact, in addition, in any case, that is… • Example: Monica loves food. She is a chef. • Monica loves food. In fact, she is a chef.

16. Transitions – To Prove • Example: Senator Hoeven is concerned with environmental regulations that affect the coal industry. He recently toured ND coal plants with federal EPA officials. • Senator Hoeven is concerned with environmental regulations that affect the coal industry. In fact, he recently toured ND coal plants with federal EPA officials.

17. Transitions – To Show Exception • These words help you move to an idea that counters an earlier idea • Yet, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, of course, once in a while, sometimes… • Example: Phoebe acts unintelligently. She has some of the smartest observations. • Phoebe acts unintelligently. Yet, she has some of the smartest observations.

18. Transitions – To Show Exception • Example: America desires to be energy independent. A number of American environmental groups seek to halt coal production. • America desires to be energy independent. Yet, a number of American environmental groups seek to halt coal production.

19. Transitions – To Show Time • When telling events in a chronological sequence, these words help make the order clear: • Immediately, thereafter, soon, after a few hours, finally, then, later, previously, formerly, first (second, etc.), next, and then… • Example: Ross and Rachel get married. They get a divorce. They have a baby. • First, Ross and Rachel get married. Soon after, they get a divorce. Then, they have a baby.

20. Transitions – To Show Time • Example: Coal producers locate coal deposits. They remove the coal. They reclaim the land. • First, coal producers locate coal deposits. Soon after, they remove the coal. Then, they reclaim the land.

21. Transitions – To Repeat • These types of transitional devices help remind the reader what you have mentioned before: • In brief, as I have said, as I have noted, as has been noted… • Example: Ross and Rachel have a crazy relationship. • As has been shown, Ross and Rachel have a crazy relationship.

22. Transitions – To Repeat • Example: The production of coal is a complex and controversial subject. • As has been shown, the production of coal is a complex and controversial subject.

23. Transitions – To Emphasize • Emphasis words do just that – serve to emphasize points that you want the reader to really be aware of and understand: • Definitely, extremely, obviously, in fact, indeed, in any case, absolutely, positively, naturally, surprisingly, always, forever, never, emphatically, unquestionably, without a doubt, certainly, undeniably, without reservation… • Example: Ross has been married three times. Ross likes to get married. • Ross has been married three times. Obviously, Ross likes to get married.

24. Transitions – To Emphasize • Example: The Environmental Protection Agency has proposed ever more rigid regulations on coal-fired power plants. Strict EPA regulations will impact the coal industry. • The Environmental Protection Agency has proposed ever more rigid regulations on coal-fired power plants. Obviously,strict EPA regulations will impact the coal industry.

25. Transitions – To Show Sequence or “Results” • If there is no clear order or you’re writing that one idea causes another, use the following words: • First, second, third, and so forth, next, then, following this, at this time, now, at this point, after, afterward, subsequently, finally, consequently, previously, before this, simultaneously, concurrently, thus, therefore, hence, next, and then, soon… • Example: Joey went to film a movie in Las Vegas. Ross and Rachel got married. • Joey went to film a movie in Las Vegas. At this time, Ross and Rachel got married.

26. Transitions – To Show Sequence or “Results” • Example: Senator Hoeven and Senator Heitcamp spoke with power plant operators. EPA officials toured DGC. • Senator Hoeven and Senator Heitcamp spoke with power plant operators.At this time,EPA officials toured DGC.

27. Transitions – To Give an Example • Words such as these clearly indicate when you’re giving an example to support yourself: • For example, for instance, in this case, in another case, on this occasion, in this situation, take the case of, to demonstrate, to illustrate, as an illustration… • Example: Joey does not share food. He will not even share with Emma, Rachel’s baby. • Joey does not share food. For example, he will not even share with Emma, Rachel’s baby.

28. Transitions – To Give an Example • Example: North Dakota’s strong economy also relies on agriculture. Over half of North Dakota’s jobs are related to agriculture. • North Dakota’s strong economy also relies on agriculture. For example,over half of North Dakota’s jobs are related to agriculture.

29. Transitions – To Summarize or Conclude • When trying to summarize your points, using these words clearly signals your intent: • In brief, on the whole, summing up, to conclude, in conclusion, as I have shown, as I have said, hence, therefore, accordingly, thus, as a result, consequently, on the whole… • Example: Friends shows the lives of six friends. It shows how they interact with each other. • Friends shows the lives of six friends. Consequently, it shows how they interact with each other.

30. Transitions – To Summarize or Conclude • Example: Both agriculture and the energy industries exist in this state. They interact with each other. • Both agriculture and the energy industries exist in this state. Consequently,they interact with each other.

31. Transitions: Repeating Key Words • Example: North Dakota offers people numerous types of employment. Because of those employment opportunities, people from all over now move to this state.

32. Sources • Information courtesy of: • Purdue OWL: Transitional Devices (Connecting Words)– http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/print/general/gl_transition.html • Standout Essays Writing Tutorial: Creating Smooth Transitions – http://www.standoutessay.com/tutorial/transitions.html • The Writing Center, University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill: Transitions – http://www.unc.edu/depts/wcweb/handouts/transitions.html