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Persuasive Essay

Persuasive Essay . Problem Areas. Plagiarism. About 50% of you PLAGIARIZED What does this mean? You did NOT cite the information you used from sites. In other words, many of you had facts or statistics in your papers and you did not say where you got it from. THIS IS A PROBLEM. Why?.

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Persuasive Essay

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  1. Persuasive Essay Problem Areas

  2. Plagiarism • About 50% of you PLAGIARIZED • What does this mean? • You did NOT cite the information you used from sites. • In other words, many of you had facts or statistics in your papers and you did not say where you got it from. THIS IS A PROBLEM. Why?

  3. Heading • There is a required heading and title for EVERY final copy. I put the requirements on my website. • Next time, I WILL TAKE POINTS OFF for incorrect and missing headings and titles.

  4. Forced Vocabulary • Some of you added sentences JUST to get your vocabulary in • It sounded forced, and therefore, did not receive full credit. It should sound natural.

  5. In-text Citations • Some were incorrect – article titles need to be in quotation marks • Ex – (Hurt “Dust Bowl”). • Some paragraphs had ZERO in-text citations. What’s wrong with that?

  6. “Now” • What’s wrong with using the word “now” in this paper? • “Now, the Dust Bowlers ………”

  7. Works Cited • For the most part, it was good; however, some people were missing some of the sources they cited. (Surviving the Dust Bowl docu) • On the other hand, some people had sources listed that were not cited in the paper, telling me that you did not cite your information.

  8. Contractions • Can’t – cannot • Should’ve – Should have • Why do we not use contractions in academic papers?

  9. Fluff • On some papers I wrote the word “fluff” because there was information that just didn’t need to be there and was unnecessary

  10. Elaboration • BIG OOPSIES • So many of you had awesome facts • The problem? • You didn’t elaborate using your own words! I don’t care what Douglas Hurt said, I want to know how you connect it to your position statement.

  11. Ending a paragraph with a quote • What’s wrong with that? • NEVER DO IT

  12. Pasted • Past or passed, never pasted • (UNLESS YOU’RE GLUING SOMETHING)

  13. PEER-EDITING • SOME were great. • Others were not.

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