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当开头段成为一种习惯

当开头段成为一种习惯. 小马过河孙思达 sunsida@xiaoma.com. 七月写作公开课. 告别吊丝表达－词汇 让你的句型炫起来－句式 当开头段变成一种习惯－段落 7 月 9 日 “ 绝对 ” 不能太绝对－独立写作绝对词题型 7 月 13 日 A 好 B 好，比比就好－独立写作对比类题型 7 月 16 日 三里挑一怎么挑呢－独立写作三里挑一题型 7 月 20 日 让绝对词无处可藏－独立写作隐藏绝对词类 7 月 24 日 教授，为何你总是挑刺！－综合写作 7 月 28 日. 开头段写什么？. 话题背景 扣题 我的观点. 话题背景.

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当开头段成为一种习惯

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  1. 当开头段成为一种习惯 小马过河孙思达 sunsida@xiaoma.com

  2. 七月写作公开课 告别吊丝表达－词汇 让你的句型炫起来－句式 当开头段变成一种习惯－段落 7月9日 “绝对”不能太绝对－独立写作绝对词题型 7月13日 A好B好，比比就好－独立写作对比类题型 7月16日 三里挑一怎么挑呢－独立写作三里挑一题型 7月20日 让绝对词无处可藏－独立写作隐藏绝对词类 7月24日 教授，为何你总是挑刺！－综合写作 7月28日

  3. 开头段写什么？ 话题背景 扣题 我的观点

  4. 话题背景 （1）时代 适用范围：话题的产生与时代有紧密／明显关联 （2）共识；或非时代 适用范围：话题的产生与时代没有紧密、明显关联

  5. 话题背景 例1. In twenty years, printed books will be no longer in existence. 例2. The best way to relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone. 例3. The most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns. 例4. A person’s childhood years are the most important years of a person’s life.

  6. 时代背景 通过某种变化／发展／趋势引出话题 In twenty years, printed books will be no longer in existence. With the rapid development of technology, e-books are preferred by an increasing number of people. As a result, the issue as to whether or not printed books will be substituted by e-books was brought into public focus. As far as I am concerned, considering the many distinctive merits of printed books, they will never become extinct and I disagree with the statement.

  7. 时代背景 通过某种变化／发展／趋势引出话题 In twenty years, printed books will be no longer in existence. As e-books are getting increasingly popular among people, whether or not printed books will be substituted by e-books has received a lot of attention. As far as I am concerned, considering the many distinctive merits of printed books, they will never become extinct and I disagree with the statement.

  8. 时代背景 通过某种变化／发展／趋势引出话题 In twenty years, printed books will be no longer in existence. With the general trend that more people prefer e-books to printed books, there is a growing concern that the latter one will be no longer in existence in twenty years. As far as I am concerned, considering the many distinctive merits of printed books, they will never become extinct and I disagree with the statement.

  9. 时代背景 通过某种变化／发展／趋势引出话题 In twenty years, printed books will be no longer in existence. Nowadays, e-books are getting popular among people because they are more convenient than printed books. This trend has given rise to the discussionas to whether or not e-books will substitute printed books. As far as I am concerned, considering the many distinctive merits of printed books, they will never become extinct and I disagree with the statement.

  10. 时代背景 With the general trend that…/with the advent of/ with the innovations/progress realized in the field of… The issue as to whether or not … was brought into public focus/has received a lot of attention/has become a public concern Some/many people assume/claim/argue/hold/maintain/contend that… As far as I am concerned/from a personal perspective/from my own perspective, …

  11. 共识背景 直接切入, 或，通过共识观点引题 Childhood years are the most important years of a person’s life. As is often alleged by some experts in education, a person’s experience in childhood years may have profound influence on his whole life. However, are we putting too much emphasis to this phase of life by stating that it is the most important one? From a personal perspective, the statement goes too far since it may have overlooked other important periods that are equally, if not more, important in a person’s life. Therefore I disagree with it.

  12. 共识背景 As is known to all,/As is widely accepted,/It is common knowledge that…/As is argued by… that… The issue as to whether or not … was brought into public focus/has received a lot of attention/has become a public concern Some/many people assume/claim/argue/hold/maintain/contend that… As far as I am concerned/from a personal perspective/from my own perspective, …

  13. 结尾段 内容：简单回顾文章，重申观点 表示总结： In short; In conclusion; To sum up; In summary; In a word, …… From what has been discussed / stated above, we can come to / draw / arrive at the conclusion that…

  14. 结尾段 If you do not agree with the statement， here are some words you might need: Unwarranted; unjustifiable; ungrounded; invalid; unsound; misconceived; misleading. 片面的：one-sided; 有偏见的：biased, prejudiced 极端的：…goes too far/ …goes to extreme by saying that… 夸张的：exaggerated; is an overstatement.

  15. 结尾段 From what has been argued above, I consider it unwarranted to assert that + statement的观点 + because + 简述理由。Therefore, I disagree with the statement. In conclusion, the statement is one-sided since it fails to consider other factors such as…… Thus, I don’t agree with the statement.

  16. 结尾段 In twenty years, printed books will no longer be in existence. From what has been discussed above, I consider it invalid to assert that printed books will not be needed in the future since the statement fails to take into consideration that not only do e-books have several drawbacks, printed books also enjoy incomparable advantages. So I disagree with the statement.

  17. The End Thank you all for your time.

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