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Essay structure. Tell us what you’re teaching us (intro) Teach us (body) Tell us what you taught us (conclusion). Sample conclusion.
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Essay structure • Tell us what you’re teaching us (intro) • Teach us (body) • Tell us what you taught us (conclusion)
Sample conclusion Janie and the villagers are freed from their unsatisfying lives once they feel the power of love. Janie's troubled marriages hold her down until Teacake's love sets her free from the role and identity that Nanny impressed upon her and which have confused and wounded her for so long. She now has the freedom to find herself. Thanks to his true love. In the same way, the villagers live lonely, routine lives until Esteban washes into their lives and inspires them to be different, better people. He shows them the drab lives that they live, and this gives them the permission to embrace a new lifestyle and identity. These works show that the power of love is strong enough to free and inspire people to embrace things they may have feared and make new lives.
Answer these questions • 1st The works demonstrate…(reformulate your thesis. Use the same big thematic ideas, but be more specific now that you’ve taught us all about them ) • 2nd What was the highlight from each text …(what did you discuss in depth –major thematic ideas and examples? • 3rd These authors…(does what, shows what, tells what to ALL PEOPLE through this story?)
1st same big thematic ideas, but be more specific 2ndthe highlight from each text 3rdshows what to ALL PEOPLE Janie and the villagers are freed from their unsatisfying lives once they feel the power of love. Janie's troubled marriages hold her down until Teacake's love sets her free from the role and identity that Nanny impressed upon her and which have confused and wounded her for so long. She now has the freedom to find herself. Thanks to his true love. In the same way, the villagers live lonely, routine lives until Esteban washes into their lives and inspires them to be different, better people. He shows them the drab lives that they live, and this gives them the permission to embrace a new lifestyle and identity. These works show that the power of love is strong enough to free and inspire people to embrace things they may have feared and make new lives.