Showing vs. Telling

Dec 20, 2012

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Tell: It was a hot day.. Show: As Alicia stepped into the white hot light of noon, she felt her black hair attract the sun's rays and begin to fry her head.. Tell: Charlie looked sad. . Show: Charlie's rear end sagged and his head drooped so low his ears dragged on the ground.. Tell: Mrs. Parker wa

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Showing vs. Telling

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