如何拓展写作要点： 对某一现象赞同或反对

1. 如何拓展写作要点： 对某一现象赞同或反对

2. 对于此类要点，先用一两句话把现象简要说说，再表明你是赞成还是反对，观点要明确，再简单说明理由。常用的句型有：对于此类要点，先用一两句话把现象简要说说，再表明你是赞成还是反对，观点要明确，再简单说明理由。常用的句型有： 表示赞成的句型： ⑴ As far as I am concerned，I completely agree that ...

3. ⑵ Personally speaking，I can’t agree more with... ⑶ From my point of view，I am in favour of the idea that... ⑷ I argue/speak in support of...

4. 表示反对的句型： ⑴ I strongly argue against the thought/idea that ... ⑵ I strongly disagree with.... ⑶ I don’t think/believe that... ⑷ I don’t support sth./sb....

5. 说明理由的句型： ⑴ The main reason is...what is more，....Thirdly，....As a result，... ⑵ ...mainly because... In addition，... ⑶ For one thing...；and for another...，

6. ［即时练习］ (2009年高考要点3)你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照？ 名师点拨： ⑴ 考生发表看法时，可有主张禁止和不禁止两种，要点要明确：一是支持“禁止拍照”，因为拍照影响了动物的正常生活、给游客增加了被动物袭击的风险等；二是反对“禁止拍照”，因为拍照可以给游客带来乐趣、吸引游客增加动物园的收入等。

7. ⑵ 可套用以下模板： (表明观点：支持或反对)From my point of view，...(说明理由) The main reason is that...(理由一). What’s more，...(理由二). As a result，(结论)

8. (表明观点) From my point of view，photographing with animals should be stopped/banned. (说明理由)The main reason is that visitors’ taking pictures with animals will influence their life，which makes them likely to hurt people(理由一).

9. What’s more，as members of nature，people should live in harmony with animals，instead of annoying them(理由二). As a result，we need to show our respect to them，which helps them enjoy a normal and relaxed life(结论).

10. 如何拓展写作要点：提出建议或措施

11. 指解决某一个问题可能的方法，建议要切实可行，不能泛泛而谈，还要从多方面入手，不能只局限于某一方面，涉及面要广，特别是社会问题，要从政府、家庭、企业、个人等方面要采取相应的措施，措施要具体。常用的句型有：指解决某一个问题可能的方法，建议要切实可行，不能泛泛而谈，还要从多方面入手，不能只局限于某一方面，涉及面要广，特别是社会问题，要从政府、家庭、企业、个人等方面要采取相应的措施，措施要具体。常用的句型有： ⑴ I suggest some possible solutions to ...For one thing，... For another ... 对……我提出以下可能的解决办法。一方面，……；另一方面……

12. ⑵ Some workable advice may be taken to ...First of all，...In addition，another way contributing to success of solving the problem is ...对……可采取一些切实可行的措施。首先，……；另外，……；能成功解决这个问题的方法还有…… ⑶ Here are some suggestions on how to deal with ...To begin with...，Moreover...，Finally...下面是对于如何处理……的方法。第一，……；此外……，最后……

13. ⑷ We should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.Firstly，...Secondly，...Finally，...我们应当采取一系列有效措施来处理这种情况。第一第……；二……；最后……

14. ［即时练习］ (2009惠州三模要点2)人们应该如何避免交通事故？ 名师点拨：写这个要点时，要从汽车司机、骑自行车的人、行人等方面来提出具体有效的办法。

15. Some workable advice may be taken to avoid traffic accidents. First，everyone must obey the traffic rules and goes their own ways.Besides，drivers should keep their emotions under control and never drive after drinking.

16. Never do they make phone calls when driving.Finally，everybody should keep the road signs beside the roads in mind and pedestrians must walk along the pavements. Only by everyone’s effort can the road accidents be reduced.

17. 如何拓展写作要点：论利弊优劣

18. 正反或利弊类文章可以先总括，再分写好处和弊处,可以用On the one hand...，On the other hand.../In contrast...句型；或先写好处，再通过使用过渡手法However或Every coin has two sides等转向负面影响，再得出结论(Its advantages far outweigh its disadvantages.或Its disadvantages far outweigh its advantages)。不要无谓地重复文章的中心，要用支持性的观点进行论述。常用的句式有：

19. 利弊对比： ⑴ Evidently，... has both negative and positive effects.On the one hand，...On the other hand，...显然，……既有积极的影响又有消极的影响。一方面……；另一方面……

20. ⑵ Generally speaking，there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly， ...Secondly...However，its disadvantages/weaknesses are also obvious.One of the disadvantages is that....To make matters worse，...一般说来，有如下几个积极的方面，第一……第二……。然后，其不利的一面也显而易见，其中一个不利因素是……；更糟糕的是……

21. ⑶ Generally，its advantages can be seen as follows.For one thing，...For another...But every coin has two sides.The disadvantages are also apparent. 一般可以看出，这有如下优点，一来，二来。但是事物都是一分为二的，其缺点也是显然的。

22. 得出结论： ⑴ Through the above analysis，I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore，I would like to... 通过以上分析，利大于弊。因此，我想…… ⑵ From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of ... we know that its advantages far outweigh its disadvantages.Therefore，we should... 通过利弊分析，我们知道，其利远远大于弊，因此，我们应该……

23. ［即时练习］ (2009年中山市模拟要点2)压力的正面和负面的作用。 名师点拨：采用先总后分，一分为二的方法来论述压力的正面和负面作用，最后再用一句话总结。

24. (总述)Pressure has both advantages and disadvantages.(利)On the one hand，a certain amount of pressure can encourage us，inspire us and promote us. (弊) On the other hand， too much pressure will certainly do harm to us students，which may influence our health and study.

25. (总结) Therefore，we should try to bring the advantages of pressure into full play，and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.

26. 如何拓展写作要点： 说明计划或经过

27. 把计划或方式、经过有条理地写出来，同时运用一些合适的表示先后或递进关系的过渡词，如：First，Next，Then，Finally./Firstly，secondly，finally等。把计划或方式、经过有条理地写出来，同时运用一些合适的表示先后或递进关系的过渡词，如：First，Next，Then，Finally./Firstly，secondly，finally等。 ［即时练习］ 你如何安排你高三毕业的这个暑假？ 名师点拨：可从访友、娱乐、学习和旅游等方面来谈。

28. When the holiday comes，having a good rest and relaxing myself can not be overlooked. First，I will visit some friends I haven’t seen for months and share my joys and sorrows in high school with them.Then，if possible，a nice trip will be best.Finally,I should read some books to prepare myself for the coming university life.

29. 如何拓展写作要点： 说明事物的重要性

30. 说明某一品质或做某事的重要性时，从多方面来阐述，如社会、生活、工作、学习等方面来论述，切忌泛泛而谈，同时还要条理清晰。常用到的句型有：说明某一品质或做某事的重要性时，从多方面来阐述，如社会、生活、工作、学习等方面来论述，切忌泛泛而谈，同时还要条理清晰。常用到的句型有： ⑴ ... is of great importance/significance/ value/help.To begin with，it can...Besides，it strengthens the tie between... Finally，it helps to... ⑵ ... has a great impact on … Firstly， ...Secondly，... Thirdly，...

31. ⑶ ... plays an important/significant role/part in ... For one thing，...For another，... ［即时练习］ 谈谈与父母交流思想的重要性。 名师点拨：先用一句话总说重要性，然后再说具体在哪方面的重要性，最后点题。

32. (总说) Children’s communicating with parents plays an important part in building a harmonious relationship with each other. (列举一方面) For one thing，willingness to exchange opinions means trusting each other，which leads to better understanding of each other.

33. (例举另一方面)For another，it can narrow the generation gap and reduce conflicts，which will contribute to building up a nicer relationship between parents and children.

34. 如何拓展写作要点： 举例说明

35. 举例说明时，不宜长篇大论，可以选用一两个与主题吻合的例子，写完例子后要用一两句话重申主题。常用的句型有：举例说明时，不宜长篇大论，可以选用一两个与主题吻合的例子，写完例子后要用一两句话重申主题。常用的句型有： ⑴ for instance,for example,such as 例如 ⑵ take sb./sth.as an example，take sb./sth. for example以……为例 (3)Onee example is...，another example is ... 一个例子是……另一个例子……

36. ⑷ A good case in point is ... 一个很好的例子是…… ⑸ Such examples might be given easily... 很容易举出这样的例子…… ⑹ There are some examples in our daily life...在我们日常生活中就有这样的例子……

37. ［即时练习］ (2009年肇庆二模要点1)举例说明细节的重要性。 名师点拨：先用一句话来概述细节的重要性，再举两个例子进一步说明，最后再用一句话点题。

38. (概述)It is the little things in daily life that count.The same thing happens in our society.(例证一) One example is the “Wenchuan Earthquake”. Everyone in China lent a hand to the victims，which made them undergo the hardship.

39. (例证二) Another example is that the great success of the 2008 Beijing Olympics depends on the efforts of each participant doing the socalled “details” or little things.(点题) In one word， little things or details is of great importance.

40. 如何拓展写作要点：说明理由

41. 先明确表明自己的观点，然后再列出具体的多个理由，不能一句话轻轻带过。可用句型有：先明确表明自己的观点，然后再列出具体的多个理由，不能一句话轻轻带过。可用句型有： ⑴ There are reasons why ... First of all，...Then...Finally，...做某事的原因有：第一，……；其次，……；最后…… ⑵ Reasons for this are varied.Some people think...Others think...其原因是多方面的，有人认为……另外一些人认为……

42. ⑶ I firmly support the view that... because ...In addition，...我坚决赞同……的看法，因为……，此外…… ⑷ The reasons can be listed as follows./The reasons for this are as follows.To begin with，...In addition，... 其理由可列举如下/其理由如下：首先，……；其次，……

43. ［即时练习］ (2009年高考)人们在参观动物园时为什么喜欢和动物拍照？ 名师点拨：先用一句话总说人们喜欢和动物拍照，然后再列出几个理由。

44. (明确观点)When visiting wildlife parks，many tourists love to take photos with animals. (总述理由) Reasons for this are varied. (例举理由) Some people want to remember their enjoyable and unforgettable experience with the animals by taking photos with them(第一条).

45. Besides，animals like koala and panda are so lovely that many tourists can not help hugging them and photographing with them(第二条).

46. 如何拓展写作要点：说明异同

47. 采用分说的方法，先谈谈相同之处，再谈其不同之处。常用的句型有：采用分说的方法，先谈谈相同之处，再谈其不同之处。常用的句型有： ⑴ There are some similarities between ... 在……与……之间，有一些相同之处。 ⑵ ...while...……而…… ⑶ There are also some evident differences ... 也有一些明显不同的地方。

48. ［即时练习］ 说说传统书本与电子书本的异同。 名师点拨：采用分说的方法，先说similarities，再说differences。

49. (先说同) There are some similarities between traditional books and e-books.Both of them are good means of people conveying emotions and expressing opinions，from where readers can get information.

50. (转折) However，(对比说异) traditional books are heavy to carry but do less harm to eyes while e-books are more environmentally friendly with more information available.