Query letters

1. Query letters Some tips from Writer’s Digest (and me) on getting your work published

2. Develop your idea • Do your pre-reporting

3. Develop your idea • Do your pre-reporting • Background research

4. Develop your idea • Do your pre-reporting • Background research • A few interviews

5. Develop your idea • Do your pre-reporting • Background research • A few interviews • Narrow your focus

6. Develop your idea • Do your pre-reporting • Background research • A few interviews • Narrow your focus • Write a theme sentence and a nut graf

7. Develop your idea • Do your pre-reporting • Research publications

8. Develop your idea • Do your pre-reporting • Research publications • What is a likely market for my story?

9. Develop your idea • Do your pre-reporting • Research publications • What is a likely market for my story? • Who is its target audience?

10. Develop your idea • Do your pre-reporting • Research publications • What is a likely market for my story? • Who is its target audience? • Whom should I contact?

11. Develop your idea • Do your pre-reporting • Research publications • Making the pitch

12. Develop your idea • Do your pre-reporting • Research publications • Making the pitch • Formal letter or e-mailed proposal?

13. Develop your idea • Do your pre-reporting • Research publications • Making the pitch • Formal letter or e-mail? • Finished article or story proposal?

14. Develop your idea • Do your pre-reporting • Research publications • Making the pitch • Possible markets

15. Develop your idea • Do your pre-reporting • Research publications • Making the pitch • Possible markets • Northeastern News

16. Develop your idea • Do your pre-reporting • Research publications • Making the pitch • Possible markets • South End News

17. Develop your idea • Do your pre-reporting • Research publications • Making the pitch • Possible markets • Bay Windows

18. Develop your idea • Do your pre-reporting • Research publications • Making the pitch • Possible markets • ThePhoenix.com

19. Develop your idea • Do your pre-reporting • Research publications • Making the pitch • Possible markets • Weekly Dig

20. Develop your idea • Do your pre-reporting • Research publications • Making the pitch • Possible markets • Improper Bostonian

21. Develop your idea • Do your pre-reporting • Research publications • Making the pitch • Possible markets • Boston magazine

22. Develop your idea • Do your pre-reporting • Research publications • Making the pitch • Possible markets • Boston/Bay State Banner

23. Elements of the query letter • One page, single-spaced

24. Elements of the query letter • One page, single-spaced • Address the editor by name

25. Elements of the query letter • One page, single-spaced • Address the editor by name • Do not assume “Mr.” or “Ms.”

26. Elements of the query letter • One page, single-spaced • Grab the editor’s attention

27. Elements of the query letter • One page, single-spaced • Grab the editor’s attention • Your first paragraph could be your lede

28. Elements of the query letter • One page, single-spaced • Grab the editor’s attention • Explain what the story is about

29. Elements of the query letter • One page, single-spaced • Grab the editor’s attention • Explain what the story is about • Your second paragraph could be your nut

30. Elements of the query letter • One page, single-spaced • Grab the editor’s attention • Explain what the story is about • Tell the editor how you’ll proceed

31. Elements of the query letter • One page, single-spaced • Grab the editor’s attention • Explain what the story is about • Tell the editor how you’ll proceed • List a few people you will/have interviewed

32. Elements of the query letter • One page, single-spaced • Grab the editor’s attention • Explain what the story is about • Tell the editor how you’ll proceed • List a few people you will/have interviewed • Offer a bit of background information

33. Elements of the query letter • One page, single-spaced • Grab the editor’s attention • Explain what the story is about • Tell the editor how you’ll proceed • Outline your qualifications

34. Elements of the query letter • One page, single-spaced • Grab the editor’s attention • Explain what the story is about • Tell the editor how you’ll proceed • Outline your qualifications • Accentuate the positive

35. Elements of the query letter • One page, single-spaced • Grab the editor’s attention • Explain what the story is about • Tell the editor how you’ll proceed • Outline your qualifications • Accentuate the positive • Don’t be defensive

36. Elements of the query letter • One page, single-spaced • Grab the editor’s attention • Explain what the story is about • Tell the editor how you’ll proceed • Outline your qualifications • Accentuate the positive • Don’t be defensive • Always include clips

37. Elements of the query letter • One page, single-spaced • Grab the editor’s attention • Explain what the story is about • Tell the editor how you’ll proceed • Outline your qualifications • End with a request to write the article

38. Elements of the query letter • One page, single-spaced • Grab the editor’s attention • Explain what the story is about • Tell the editor how you’ll proceed • Outline your qualifications • End with a request to write the article • Approximate length

39. Elements of the query letter • One page, single-spaced • Grab the editor’s attention • Explain what the story is about • Tell the editor how you’ll proceed • Outline your qualifications • End with a request to write the article • Approximate length • When you would be able to finish it

40. Example of a query Katrina vanden HeuvelEditor and PublisherThe Nation33 Irving PlaceNew York, NY 10003Dear Ms. vanden Heuvel:

41. Example of a query At a time when the mainstream news media are being threatened by declining circulation, shrinking audiences and falling ad revenues, Jay Rosen thinks he has a better idea. The New York University journalism professor is the founder of NewAssignment.Net, which seeks to bring professional journalists and citizen activists together to work on investigative projects that otherwise might not get done.

42. Example of a query Such collaborations, which Rosen calls “pro/am journalism,” may be vital to reviving both the spirit and the reality of public-service journalism. Newspapers, television stations and other media are cutting their staffs, making it difficult to do the kind of investigative reporting on which democracy thrives. Rosen and his supporters hope they can develop a new model that will preserve journalism even in the face of shrinking news budgets.

43. Example of a query I have been in touch with Rosen, who has agreed to an in-depth interview. I would also interview other participants in the project as well as skeptics who believe that “pro/am journalism” could undermine traditional news values.

44. Example of a query Following a long career as the media critic for the Boston Phoenix, I am now teaching journalism at Northeastern University. I write a regular media column for CommonWealth Magazine and produce the weblog Media Nation, and I closely follow trends in how the Internet is changing journalism. You can read my recent work at www.dankennedy.net.

45. Example of a query I would like to write an article for The Nation about Rosen’s project and what it means for the future of journalism. I propose a 2,000- to 3,000-word piece, which I could deliver to you around mid-May.

46. Example of a query Thank you for your attention. I hope to hear from you soon.Sincerely,Dan KennedyVisiting Assistant ProfessorSchool of JournalismNortheastern University(617) 373-5187da.kennedy@neu.edu