Periodic Assessment Analysis / Nonfiction

Periodic Assessment Analysis /Nonfiction English III Spring 2011 Mrs. Winn

“The Crystal Night” 1. Which words from paragraph 8 best help the reader understand the meaning of the word ransacked in paragraph 13? ¶ 13 – Lugging our heavy suitcases, we walked past the temple, which was still burning, and past the ransacked homes of our friends. f. smashing furniture and dishes(28) g. beasts of prey (8) h. military decorations (6) j. my mother found the courage to say (14)

“The Crystal Night” 2. What caused Landau’s temple to burn? a. The building was old and made mostly of wood. (3) b. It was bombed during the war by the Russians and Americans. (4) c. Angry Germans set fire to it after a Polish Jew killed a German in Paris. (32) In Paris, an enraged Polish Jew shot and killed an employee of the German embassy when he learned that his parents had been deported from Germany to Poland. At seven o’clock on the morning of November 10, one of our maids came into my bedroom and awakened me with soft, halting words: “Honey, if you want to see the temple again get up now, because it’s on fire.” d. Fleeing German Jews burned the temple so the Germans could not occupy it. (6)

“The Crystal Night” 3. Paragraphs 13 through 15 are mainly about – f. the family and other Jews fleeing their homes (29) g. the family boarding the train to flee to their relatives (10) h. the family’s decision to pack up their belongings (3) j. the kindness of the narrator’s mother toward her neighbors (3)

“The Crystal Night” 4. Why was the family’s house not destroyed? a. The German soldiers did not have time to raid the house. (8) b. The narrator’s mother was able to put out the fire. (2) c. The U.S. government instructed the Germans not to harm it. (4) d. The narrator’s parents had served in the German military. (31) “We have served Germany faithfully both in peace and in war,” and with that she pointed to the china cabinet, where the military decorations bestowed upon her and my father lay on a black velvet pillow, along with my grandfather’s medals from the Franco-Prussian War. When the men saw these, one of them immediately gave the command to stop, but it was too late.

“The Crystal Night” 5. In paragraph 8, the author uses a simile to – Like beasts of prey fallen upon their victims, they went from room to room, systematically smashing furniture and dishes, cutting up oriental rugs, tearing open feather pillows, even slashing canvases in their frames – my mother’s own paintings. f. describe how courageous her mother was (3) g. depict the power of the soldiers’ weapons (1) h. illustrate the brutality displayed by the German soldiers (37) j. show that her mother and father had served Germany (3) Simile - figure of speech in which two unlike things are explicitly compared, as in “she is like a rose.”

“The Crystal Night” 6. In paragraph 16, the two burning Sabbath candles symbolize – On [the dining room table] was the most beautiful sight of all: two burning Sabbath candles. [. . . ] After the events of the past two days, the radiance of their flickering light gave me an indescribable feeling of peace. [. . .] I knew that God would never forsake us. f. unity (7) g. fire (0) h. night (0) j. hope (37) symbolizes - stand for or represent in the manner of a symbol. symbol - a material object representing something, often something immaterial 7

“The Crystal Night” 7. Which of these best describes the primary conflict faced by the narrator and her family? f. They had to replace the belongings damaged by the German soldiers. (8) g. They could no longer practice their religion freely. (2) h. They were forced to separate because of the impending war. (4) j. They had to leave their home and country to survive. (31) conflict - a fight, battle, or struggle, especially a prolonged struggle; strife.

“The Crystal Night” 8. Paragraphs 2 and 3 are important to the selection because they – ¶ 2 – My childhood was an abundance of happy occasions. ¶ 3 – Shortly after Hitler’s rise to power, menacing signs sprang up. a. contrast the narrator’s life before and after Hitler’s rise to power (33) b. provide a reason why the narrator’s family had to leave Landau (2) c. detail the narrator’s nostalgia for her childhood (4) d. explain that the narrator is Jewish (4) Nostalgia - a sentimental yearning for the happiness of a former place or time.

“The Crystal Night” 9. In paragraph 8, the author’s use of vivid verbs – . . . Systematically smashing up furniture and dishes, cutting up oriental rugs, tearing open feather pillows, even slashing canvases in their frames. f. shows how significant the war medals were to her mother (5) g. expresses how afraid of the German soldiers she was (7) h. portrays the abrupt and frenzied nature of the soldiers’ invasion (23) j. details the family’s reaction to the soldiers’ invasion(9) vivid - full of life; lively; animated 10

“The Crystal Night” 10. How was the narrator’s visit to Landau in 1961 important? I saw bombed-out houses, whole blocks leveled by air strikes, and I was grateful – yes, grateful – for I realized that the events that drove us from home [. . .] had spared my family the horrors of war. a. She fully understood how fortunate she and her family had been to escape. (33) b. She needed to revisit Landau to remember what had happened. (4) c. It enabled her to finally let go of her past. (5) d. It allowed her husband to understand what she had gone through. (2) 11 11

“The Crystal Night” 11. Which of these best expresses the narrator’s realization of the danger her family faced? f. During the dreary days of early November, the damp, cold mood of Mother Nature reflected our own only too well. (6) g. After they left, my mother sent my brother and me to bed. (4) h. We were fortunate to have distant relatives who ran a small hotel in Mannheim. (4) j. Now my brother and I could read the sadness and fear in our parents’ eyes. (30)

“Breakfast in Virginia” & “Crystal Night” 12. What historical element do the selections have in common? a. Both show how Jim Crow laws were enforced. (1) NOT – Crystal Night b. Both detail the persecution of Jews. (5) NOT – Breakfast in Virginia c. Both occur while Hitler was in power. (24) BiV: “bring an end to Hitlerism” (6) CN: “When Adolf Hitler became chancellor of Germany” (7) d. Both highlight the separation between the South and the North. (13) NOT – Crystal Night

“Breakfast in Virginia” & “Crystal Night” 13. What makes the persecuted characters in both selections feel better? f. sleep (0) g. hospitality (30) h. travel (9) j. humor (3) persecuted - to annoy or trouble persistently hospitality - friendly reception and treatment of guests or strangers 14

“Breakfast in Virginia” & “Crystal Night” 14. Both selections end on a note of – a. sadness (5) b. elation (2) c. fear (1) d. gratitude (34) elation - a feeling or state of great joy or pride gratitude - feeling of being grateful or thankful 15 15

Revising & Editing 15. What change, if any, should be made in sentence 6? (6) I starred at the yearbook picture of my great-aunt. (7) The girl with the ponytail looked back at me. f. Change I to we . (0) g. Change starred to stared(29) h. Insert a comma after picture(3) j. Make no change (12) . 16

Revising & Editing 16. What is the most effective way to combine sentences 11 and 12? (11) Their ponytails swung from side to side. (12) They talked about sock hops and drive-ins. a. Their ponytails swung from side to side, talking about sock hops and drive-ins.(10) Modifier b. Since their ponytails swung from side to side, they talked about sock hops and drive-ins. (1) Transition c. Their ponytails swung from side to side, they talked about sock hops and drive-ins. (9) Run-on d. Their ponytails swung from side to side as they talked about sock hops and drive-ins. . (21) 17 17

Revising & Editing 17. Which sentence could best follow and support sentence 14? (14) In another part of the cafeteria, I noticed some boys who didn’t look like the others. (15) I suddenly realized that cliques hadn’t started with my generation; they had been around in the 1950s, too! f. They didn’t look like everyone else did. (12) g. Students in the 1950s had fewer lunch choices. (4) h. Aunt Sharon had been a cheerleader in high school. (0) j. They wore leather jackets and had much longer hair. (24) 18 18 18

Revising & Editing 18. What is the most effective way to revise sentence 16? (16) After school a boy drove Sharon home named Steve. a. After school a boy drove Sharon home, his name was Steve. (3) b. After school a boy named Steve, he drove Sharon home.. (4) c. After school a boy who drove Sharon home named Steve. (0) d. After school a boy named Steve drove Sharon home. (34) 19 19 19 19

Revising & Editing 19. What change, if any, should be made in sentence 18? (18) I rode in the backseat with one of Sharon’s friends, but no one paid no attention to me. f. Change paid to has payed(10) g. Change no attention to any attention(29) h. Change me to them (0) j. Make no change (3) 20 20 20 20

Revising & Editing 20. What change, if any, should be made in sentence 22? (22) The profile of a native americanin a full headdress filledthe tiny screen set in a big wooden cabinet.. a. Change profile to profille(2) b. Change native americanto Native American (29) c. Change a filled to filling (5) d. Make no change (3) 21 21 21 21 21

Revising & Editing 21. What change, if any, should be made in sentence 23? (23) A soft hum accompanyed the black-and-white image. f. Change soft to softer(2) g. Insert it after hum(1) h. Change accompanyed to accompanied. (37) j. Make no change (1) 22 22 22 22 22

Revising & Editing 22. What change, if any, should be made in sentence 24? (24) “Why is there always a test pattern in the afternoon,”Sharon complained loudly. a. Change the comma to a question mark (23) b. Change complained to complanned(3) c. Insert quotation marks after the period (5) d. Make no change (11) 23 23 23 23 23 23

Revising & Editing 23. Which transition word or phrase should be added to the beginning of sentence 35? (34) I expected to hear Elvis Presley or the Everly Brothers. (35) I heard a man telling a mystery story in a low voice. f. For example (9) g. Instead (32) h. Likewise (0) j. Moreover (1) 24 24 24 24 24 24

Revising & Editing 24. What change should be made in sentence 36? (36) As spooky music played in the background , my head begins to swirl with visions of ponytails, convertibles, and TV screens. a. Insert a comma after played(1) b. Change the comma after background to a semicolon (5) c. Change begins to began (32) d. Change with to there were (3) 25 25 25 25 25 25

Periodic Assessment Analysis / Nonfiction