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Chapter 8 Being Concise

Chapter 8 Being Concise. Precise. Clear. Forthright. Familiar. Concise. Fluid. More is in vain when less will serve. Sir Isaac Newton. To be concise, you should learn what kinds of words to cut. Needless adjectives and adverbs. Redundancies. Writing zeroes. Needless passive voice.

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Chapter 8 Being Concise

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  1. Chapter 8Being Concise • Precise • Clear • Forthright • Familiar • Concise • Fluid • More is in vain when less will serve. • Sir Isaac Newton

  2. To be concise, you should learn what kinds of words to cut • Needless adjectives and adverbs • Redundancies • Writing zeroes • Needless passive voice

  3. A redundancy is a needless repetition of words • guarantee • my opinion • blended • absolute guarantee • my personal opinion • blended together • bright green in color • bright green

  4. Many redundancies exist in scientific writing • already existing • alternativechoices • atthepresent time • basic fundamentals • currently under way • completely eliminate • continue toremain • currently being • empty space • first began • had done previously • introduced a new • mix together • neverbefore • none at all • now at this time • period of time • private industry • separate entities • start out • still persists • whether or not

  5. Writing zeroes are empty phrases that fatten sentences • it is my intent to show that = 0 • as a matter of fact = 0 • as is well known = 0 • it is noteworthy = 0 • the presence of = 0

  6. Many phrases are near zeroes • now • at this point in time = • at that point in time = • has the ability to = • has the potential to = • in the event that = • in the vicinity of = • owing to the fact that = • the question as to whether = • there is no doubt but that = • then • can • can • if • near • because • whether • no doubt

  7. When searching for writing zeroes, use your eraser • Vibration measurements made in the course of the Titan flight test program were complicated by the presence of intense high-frequency excitation of the vehicle shell structure during the re-entry phase of the flight. [Zoofari] • Vibration measurements made inthe Titan flight were complicated by intense high-frequency excitation of the vehicle shell during re-entry.

  8. Our goal is to obtain experimental data that can be • used with a chemical kinetics model to explain the • processes that lead to engine knock. Needless adjectives often hide behind vague nouns • The objective of our work is to obtain experimental data • that can be used in conjunction with a comprehensive • chemical kinetics modeling study to generate a detailed • understanding of the fundamental processes that lead • to engine knock.

  9. Our success relies on understanding the complex processes that govern the gas velocities. Many adverbs are unnecessary • rather unique • slows down • well proven • ratherunique • slows down • well proven • The achievement of our success relies very heavily on a rather detailed understanding • of the somewhat complex • processes that govern the gas velocities.

  10. We decided to survey the solar mirror field a second time in July to see whether the corrosion rate would increase tenfold as projected and to see whether stowing the mirrors in a vertical position would slow the rate. • syllable count • 60 Needless passive verbs attract long phrases and words • It was then concluded that a second complete solar mirror field corrosion survey should be conducted in July to determine whether the tenfold annual corrosion rate projection was valid and to allow determination whether subsequent corrective measures would be effective in retarding corrosion propagation. • syllable count • 83

  11. In summary, to be concise, you should learn what to cut in your writing • Needless adjectives and adverbs • Redundancies • Writing zeroes • Needless passive voice

  12. In summary, to be concise, you should learn what kinds of words to cut • Needless adjectives and adverbs • Redundancies • Writing zeroes • Needless passive voice

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