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Persuasive Prewrite Model Egg – (Body Paragraph) * Use keywords and phrases *Complete sentences not needed on egg. Reason: Charlie becomes lonelier. Evidence facts examples statistics quotes anecdotes. SD: (text)
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Persuasive Prewrite Model Egg – (Body Paragraph) *Use keywords and phrases *Complete sentences not needed on egg Reason: Charlie becomes lonelier Evidence facts examples statistics quotes anecdotes SD: (text) May 18- “Thank God for books and music and things I can think about. I am alone in my apartment… most of the time and seldom speak to anyone.” Elaboration/Insight clarification commentary analysis connection charged language propaganda • E: (explanation of text) • After date with Miss K realizes he can’t talk to the woman he loves • too smart • forcing him to spends time alone I: (tie back to reason- connections) This shows he’s lonelier because of his inability to communicate. C: Therefore, Charlie shouldn’t have had the operation because it made him lonelier.